chapter 1 - page 14

24 Nov 2007 08:13 pm

5.00

Author's Comments:

tii-kun,

HEHEHEHHHEE.

Laremy loves to mess with people. :'D

This page was a joy to draw.

User's Comments:

beccaPIRATE (Guest),

*DIES*
I love Laremy's humor.
And I love how he can keep a straight face, and the way that Nate reacted.

amiko_16,

ahaha I thought he was serious for a second XD;;;;

Saknika,

ROFL!

Nude modeling pays REALLY well though. Like, a hundred dollars an hour. There are agencies that sell 'em to colleges. For serious.

Zira27,

LMAO!!! haha! And of course this is the page I have to stop at... ;_; ahh~ good laugh though. beautiful comic :D

JESSIMAKUH (Guest),

Oh hohoho...! Sad thing is, I could really picture Laremy being a nude model. It's almost fitting. XD

beccaPIRATE (Guest),

I agree with Jessi. xD

Banana (Guest),

XD I have to agree with Jessi and Pirate. >3< Mmm~ nekkid Laremy.

tii-kun,

x'DDDDD I love you guys.

Sluvotsky,

Hey man, I really do like what you've got going so far, panelling and art and story wise and everything.

But if I could ask you a favor: when you put commentary in there like "not looking" and "buttering the bagle~" and whatnot, I suppose the effect is intended to be cutesy since I've seen it in the mangas I've red, BUT all it really does is look either redundant, or like the author(s) can't portray what they want to portray, and resort to commentary. I myself am tempted at times to write those little things down, too, don't get me wrong, but really, I think your comic would be loads better if you quit with the explanatory commentary.

Either way, you're hitting my favorites list. But still, I really think that'd help improve the thing in the long run.

caelcynndarr,

psstt.... garrison bowers only made ten bucks an hour for nude modeling

he must have inappropriate reactions to some of the people

(i say some because he likes to do it with anything that he can shhhh)